Sometimes you just have to keep going, or how I finished the Prague Half Marathon

Most of you know by now that I am a runner.  I do not claim to be fast or particularly good, but I find it a useful time for reflection, it gets me outside in all weather, and weight-bearing exercise is good for your bones!

Earlier this month, I ran the Prague Half Marathon.  It was an adventure from the beginning.  Due to a scheduling conflict, I arrived just before start time, and the staff/volunteers were super helpful in getting me a number and to the start line. 

Things were going well and I was having a good race.  I was on pace to finish in about 3 hours (I told you I’m slow…).  All was well.  I approached the halfway mark with joy only to be met by a volunteer who told me I had to stop running.  “Why?” I asked, confused because in all the half marathons I have run, this has never happened. “The time limit.” she replied.

Now, this confused me, and if I am honest made me a little bit angry.  First of all, I knew the time limit was three hours and by my watch, I was going to be close.  She should not be stopping me based on a split time! Second, I have never not finished a race I signed up for, even that time I had to sprint, and I use the term loosely, at the end to avoid being last.  Third, they were calculating the three hours based on the official start time, and anyone who has ever run in a race with over 12,000 people, as this one was, knows that the people at the end of the starting line cross the line at least ten to fifteen minutes later than the official start time. Nope, I was not getting on the bus like a meek mouse.  I would finish.  I saw several other people also determined and followed them to stay on the course.  

Long story short (or is it too late?), all of us in the little cadre finished the race.  In spite of the fact that they were literally picking up the course markers in front of us and several volunteers tried to convince us to stop. When we reached the end, an older Czech gentleman who had finished just before us, made sure we got our medals and a bottle of water. Our little band helped each other stay on the course and encouraged each other to finish.  I had some glucose tablets that I shared with a woman I was running beside when she looked a little shaky. She told me she wasn’t sure if she would have made it without me—it was her first half marathon. We were so happy to have crossed that line! And truthfully, none of us might have made it if not for the others.  At different points, we spotted the course markers and the turns.  Found water, walked together, ran together.  Chatted to take our minds off the pain. Together we accomplished something that we might not have been able to do on our own.  

Sometimes, when you’re writing a novel, it seems like you are alone.  But you don’t have to be. Find your cadre, and if you want to finish—don’t stop, even when they try to make you get on the bus.

You can do it.

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Part 2 of the Interview with Colin Mustful, Publisher…

Part two of my interview with Colin Mustful, this time, his perspective as a publisher.  One thing he did not mention, is that he signed NYT bestseller, Alina Adams, author of Nesting Dolls for her book, My Mother’s Secret, which is for sale at his website here:  https://www.historythroughfiction.com/my-mothers-secret  Look for a review on Readerly soon, I got my copy!

Thank you so much for letting me ask you questions for writers.  Lots of writers are interested in what it takes to be a small publisher or work with one, but don’t know anyone who is one.  You can share invaluable information to help writers succeed. 🙂

  1. Would you tell us a little bit about your background as a publisher?  What made you decide to become one, how did you get here?

It’s been a long journey that started when I finished my first novel in 2011. I had no idea what to do after I finished the first draft. I started submitting the manuscript to publishers, but I didn’t get any positive responses. Then, in the fall of 2012, I finally heard back from a publisher. They offered me an incredible contract and I was so excited that I signed it even though it required a $4,000 retainer. I didn’t know this at the time, but I had signed a contract with a Vanity Press. When my book was published in October 2013, I didn’t sell any books or have any events, and the press always wanted more money from me. It was an awful experience. 

But, I mention it here because I learned a lot of hard lessons from that experience. It was the catalyst I needed to learn more about ins and outs of book publishing. I used what I learned to self-publish two books. Then, I went back to school and earned an MFA in creative writing with a concentration in publishing. Around the time I graduated, I decided to combine my experience self-publishing with my educational background to start my own independent press.     

  1. What is the most challenging project you have worked on so far? What challenges were involved with it?

The biggest challenge for me has been digital marketing. It’s very easy to spend money on digital marketing, but it’s hard to get a positive return on investment (ROI). There’s a lot of strategy and research that goes into the various platforms and keywords for digital marketing and the best teacher is usually trial-and-error. Sometimes, even hiring an expert in digital marketing can backfire. It’s hard to find what works and it’s easy to spend a lot of money trying to find out. 

  1. You accept submissions from other writers and also indie publish your own books.  Could you tell us a little about how these two things are similar and/or different, and why you decided to do both?

When you self-publish your work, you’re running your own business. Essentially, there’s no difference between self-publishing and publishing. Being the publisher is just about taking control of the process. I can’t tell you how many times work has been rejected by agents and publishers. But now, in an era of digital printing and social media, there are less barriers to entry in publishing. I just decided to take advantage of that. It’s been an incredible amount of hard work to create a company and platform that people want to be a part of, but it’s been incredibly rewarding too. 

  1. Would you mind giving readers/writers an idea of how long the publishing process takes and what is involved between you and the writer?

It varies, but I would estimate that it takes 16-24 months from submission to publication. First, there is the submission process which takes a few months for me to review submissions and finally decide on what I want to publish. Then there’s contract negotiations which could take a day, a week, or a month. Once the contract is signed I insist on doing a developmental edit. This takes me about a month. In the meantime, I ask the author to gather as much useful marketing information as they can. Once I return their manuscript with my edits, it takes a month or two for the author to do a revision. After completing the editing process, we move to book design. This usually takes one to three months. From there it’s on to pre-marketing…things like sending out review copies and adding the book to NetGalley. Pre-marketing starts about six months prior to publication. Finally, in the last three months before publication we move onto heavy direct marketing. This means making announcements and asking our audience to pre-order the book. 

  1. What kinds of projects are you looking for in the future?

Anything and everything. As a small business, I’m always looking to grow and try new things in order to discover new audiences. And, I would like to play a role in sharing more diverse voices and stories with readers. It’s a complicated and significant issue in book publishing and one I’m trying to learn more about while facing many challenges involved in growing a small business. 

  1. What do you think is the most important thing for authors to know about getting their book ready to go out into the world?

Have patience. Find your audience, but don’t force your passion on others. Seek out and accept criticism and feedback. Be prepared for a long journey filled with setbacks and triumphs. But, practically speaking, get help. Find beta readers. Hire an editor or book coach. It will take hard work to get your book published and to make sure it stands out from the hundreds of other books published on a daily basis. But if you follow the process, you’ll succeed. 

  1. How can writers and readers find out more about  you and the books you publish?

We have a lot of information and resources available on our website at HistoryThroughFiction.com. Writers and readers can also reach out to me via email at editor@historythroughfiction.com

Interview with author Colin Mustful

This interview is in two parts, because Colin is both an author and a publisher.  This week, we hear from Colin the author:

Colin Mustful is an independent author, historian, editor, and publisher. His writing helps readers learn and understand the complicated and tragic history of settler-colonialism and Native displacement in the Upper Midwest. He has a Master of Arts degree in history and a Master of Fine Arts degree in creative writing. He is also the founder of History Through Fiction, an independent press that publishes high-quality fiction that is rooted in historical research. Mustful is an avid runner and soccer player who lives in Minneapolis, Minnesota. He believes that learning history is vital to understanding our world today and finding just, long-lasting solutions for the future.

  1. What would you most like readers to know about your books? 

My books focus on a complicated and tragic era of United States history when Indigenous peoples were forcibly removed from their homes through federal Indian policy and settler-colonialism. I’m particularly interested in what happened in the Upper Mississippi River Valley and Great Lakes area because that’s where I was born and now live. Specifically, my books, such as Fate of the Dakota and Resisting Removal, examine the U.S. – Dakota War of 1862 and the Sandy Lake Tragedy of 1850. My goal—my passion—is to discover why these events happened and what we can learn from them. I’m also interested in how this tragic history contributes to the world we live in today and the role I play in perpetuating its legacy—for better or for worse. 

  1. What advice would you give to writers that you wish you had gotten earlier?

You’ll need help. Find writers who have done what you want to do and learn from them. Accept criticism and advice and be willing to pay for expertise when you need it. 

  1.  What is some advice that you think writers should ignore?

Just don’t let anyone stop you from pursuing your goals. Listen to them, take what you can, but then move on. Every author’s journey is unique. You’ll get where you want to go if you just keep working at it. 

  1. Where can readers find out about you and your next project?

Readers can learn more about me at my website, ColinMustful.com. The best way to keep up with what I’m doing is to subscribe to my monthly newsletter which readers can do here: http://eepurl.com/h7O_wb

Book Review: The Bangalore Detective Club by Harini Nagendra

I had the privilege of interviewing Harini for the Read Like a Writer Podcast recently and her interview will be available to listeners in March, in anticipation of her new book, the second in the Bangalore Detective Club series.  

I listened to her debut novel on Audible and found it great fun.  It is a well plotted cozy mystery, set in 1920s India and besides solving a murder her heroine is also battling race and gender inequity.  I do love a Christie style mystery and Nagendra does not disappoint here.  Kaveri, our amateur sleuth, is a woman of education, somewhat a rarity, who also benefits from a loving arranged marriage to Ramu, a local doctor.  They are newlyweds, sort of, having recently officially begun their marriage, though it was arranged previously and they were already technically married.  

At a fancy dress party, the first victim falls and the chase begins. Kaveri decides she must do all she can  to clear the name of a woman of ill-repute who is being blamed and shamed, so she puts her mathematically logical mind to the task, with the help of an older woman who serves as her mentor and is also teaching her how to cook.

It is a fabulous ride through a time and place that Nagendra brings alive on the page for readers.  I am already looking forward to the next book!

PS—there are recipes in the back of the book.  Yay!

Revising is also a Life Skill

It’s time for a true confession.  I recently had to revisit a long held opinion about something and change it.  I know!  Some of you already know that I was a school librarian for a number of years.  In the course of my work as a librarian, I was fortunate enough to attend many conferences.  Second true confession, I love going to conferences.  They are like a candy stores of ideas, but I digress.

When John Green wrote his first few novels, before The Fault in Our Stars, he was a big deal to librarians.  We love great YA writing, and he is a great writer.  So I was excited to see him on panels and in presentations.  Well, I don’t know if it was because he was being guarded by agents and conference VIPs, or if it was because maybe he is a little shy and socially awkward, or maybe I was just having an off day, who knows, he came off as very full of himself whenever I saw him speak.  So, I started avoiding his presentations at conferences.  

I just didn’t like him.  I liked his books, and I even started watching his Crash Course videos, because our AP teachers used them in class, but I just couldn’t warm up to him as a person. I hung on to that first and second impression I had of him being kind of arrogant.

Well, fast forward to one of my recent  morning runs.  I sometimes listen to Guy Raz’s How I Built This and the guests for an episode were John Green and his brother Hank, the Vlog Brothers. I grudgingly decided to listen.  I was curious about their business Complexly, you can probably guess why…

I am so glad I did.  I learned a lot of things about John Green that I never knew, like for instance that it takes a whole team to make those Crash Course videos and they donate most of the profits from their businesses to charity.  Suffice it to say, I had to revise my opinion of John Green.  It turns out, he is actually a great guy who suffers from some anxiety, so maybe that’s why he seemed arrogant the first few times I saw him.  It was early in his career, so who knows.  The point is, I had to revise my thinking about something when I received new information that challenged my beliefs.

So, it is true we all have to revise our opinions occasionally, but what does this have to do with writing?  Everything.  Sometimes when we revise, we have to throw out a whole lot of stuff.  Stuff we might be attached to.  I was pretty attached to my opinion of John Green.  I like being an outlier, so I liked thinking that I wasn’t swayed by his epic writing talent and extreme popularity, I was DIFFERENT. But when I learned more facts, I decided I was wrong and that my opinion had changed.  

Maybe you’ve gotten some tough feedback about something in your story not working.  But I am DIFFERENT, you say to yourself.  Maybe you are, but is there a chance something really  isn’t working and needs to be revised?  Is it possible that you need to throw out some much beloved scenes because they don’t advance the plot, even though you love them? 

It’s hard to let go, but it is also freeing.  Letting go of something means having the ability to hold onto something else.  I can let go of thinking John Green is arrogant and hold onto the love I have for his books and videos, and his mission to keep educational content forever free.  Teachers need all the help they can get!

What can you let go of in your current WIP? What can you hold onto?

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Know when to quit…

Reading this book about knowing when to quit combined with a podcast about how to build your writing habit got me thinking.  Do you know when to quit?

I don’t mean you should quit writing.  I mean quit doing something that keeps you from writing.  Just like our main characters, we have choices.  When we choose one thing we don’t choose another thing.  

So maybe in order to make writing time, I don’t cook a recipe for dinner that takes an hour.  I cook something that will be ready in thirty minutes and use the other thirty for writing. Or I quit washing my hair every day;  I get some dry shampoo and use that 20-40 minutes to write instead. You might decide to quit doom scrolling on social media or playing Wordle, or any number of things that you don’t really care about and use that time to write your novel.

There’s another way to look at quitting in the context of writing. Sometimes we do things that “seem” like we are writing, but we are not writing. Like doing extra research, all the time.  Don’t get me wrong, I love research and I think it is important, but quit trying to get the setting perfect before you let yourself begin writing the story.  Write, and if you get to something you don’t know, put a “TK” in the text and keep going.  Highlight it or put a comment, whatever you need to do to come back to it later.  In my own writing, I will put something in all caps like AAA, so that when I am editing later, I see it.

If your main conflict isn’t working, or you need a new inciting incident, quit the one that is holding you back and create a new one. Quit the outline that no longer works or the subplot that seems cliche and make something better.

Knowing when to quit one thing and pivot to another is the part of the art of attaining big goals.  You can’t do all the things—choose the ones you want to do and do those!

Sometimes when you quit something that isn’t working, you give yourself the gift of time and freedom to choose something that does work.

Cause and Effect is Your Friend

I have been working with authors for a while now.  One of my favorite things to do is a manuscript review.  Lots of coaches don’t like doing them, but I love getting the complete picture of the work so we can take it apart and figure out how to put it together in revision that will make it a wonderful novel.

One of the most common issues authors have is a break down in the cause and effect chain of their novel.  It becomes a series of events.  This happens and then this happens, and then this happens. Once you  have a draft and you are looking at it, think about how your main character will move through the story and experience character growth.  Each action/decision needs to CAUSE what will happen next. If you take this down even further, in each scene, there should also be a cause and effect chain.  Something happens in a scene that causes something else, that leads to conflict, then resolution.  It happens over and over again in a novel, both on a micro and a macro level.  

One of the quickest ways to check yourself on this is to write your novel synopsis.  If you can write a synopsis in which each plot point logically leads to what happens next, you probably have a pretty good chain of cause and effect.  If you can’t or if it falls apart after the first 10% of the book, it may be time to have a rethink.

Reach out if you think a Manuscript Review might be just the thing you need to get your novel on track this year. You can sign up to chat with me about your book.