Top Ten Mistakes when Querying, continued

#1—Querying too soon. Okay, I hate to say it, but it’s true.  Most writers query too soon.  In the past, books could be less ready to go and still get picked up by agents or editors, and there are plenty of agents who still do editorial before they send an author’s work out on submission. Continue reading “Top Ten Mistakes when Querying, continued”

Top Ten Mistakes Authors make when Querying, continued…

ICYMI, #10 through #6 are available here and here. As promised, the last five are all content related and so a little more difficult to address than the technical errors. #5—Not connecting the reader to your main character It is vital that the opening connect the reader to the main character.  This does not meanContinue reading “Top Ten Mistakes Authors make when Querying, continued…”

Top 10 Mistakes Authors Make in Submissions, continued…

See #10 and #9 here. #8—Spending time on the set up in the query. Think of the Query as a sales document for your novel.  If you spend any of your precious (really) plot paragraph on set up, then you are not selling the actual novel.  If you’ve done your job as a writer well,Continue reading “Top 10 Mistakes Authors Make in Submissions, continued…”

Book Review: The Antidote by Karen Russell

Despite rave reviews from writers at NPR and the NY Times, I found myself agreeing more with the writer of this Slate Review.  There was beautiful language (check), there were experimental elements (check), there was an attempt to engage with society at large and ask tough questions (check). Problem for me was that it justContinue reading “Book Review: The Antidote by Karen Russell”

Don’t Cheap Out on Your Renovation or Your Novel Revision

Home Improvement is on my mind lately.  I have an old house and it needs some work—I can do some of it myself, but I will have to pay professionals to do the things I cannot do.  Looking at what the previous owners did, I have these words of advice: don’t cheap out when youContinue reading “Don’t Cheap Out on Your Renovation or Your Novel Revision”

Book Review: We Solve Murders by Richard Osman

This novel is the first entry in a new series by the author of the wildly successful Thursday Murder Club. Osman’s characteristic wit and humor are on display, and the plot was great!  This is one of those books, you will compulsively finish. We begin with a murder, of course.  Someone is murdering B-list socialContinue reading “Book Review: We Solve Murders by Richard Osman”